The intro synth has a very high pitched squeaking on the beat, which is drastically annoying. I feel that the drums could have been brought in a little smoother, maybe along with a transitional instrument. Also, the transition into the, uh, "drop" isn't too primo. It needs to have a better transition into it, as it has no hype whatsoever. Then the tune that it plays just doesn't catch on, mainly because it seems that you just copied the MIDI notes that you were playing on the annoyingly high synth and played them on a lower instrument. If anything, the drop needs drums during it. Otherwise that's more so just a transition into another period of annoyingly high pitched instrumentals. So, all in all...this song needs a synth that's more skillfully produced, with less high frequency (it pierces the ears), needs an actual melody, needs to not be as repetitive, needs to have smoother transitions, and needs a drop. Please, don't tell me my music needs a drop when this is what you call a drop. Fin.